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#1 dropkick287

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Posted December 09 2013 - 11:16 AM

Here is my light class mech design for the game. I designed this for a Hawken design comp a while back and wanted to see what all of you think. I am such a huge fan of Hawken game and art style. So creating this was probably the funnest thing I have done. I threw a solid month of my time into this and was worth every single second. I eventually plan on making a game ready mesh from this and texturing it up. Anyway, I would just really like some feedback from hardcore Hawken fans and players. Its hard asking someone to crit this when they no nothing about Hawken. Cheers!

Check my portfolio site for more angles and pics on this.
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Posted December 09 2013 - 11:26 AM

holy mother of god that is awesome e.e
though it needs more covering as hawken mechs are not that "open"
also add weapons that are in game to see witch would fit it
and a repair drone for fun :3

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#3 Alpha_Stryke

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Posted December 09 2013 - 11:30 AM

Kinda reminds me of an infiltrator, but with a wider and more open torso. That's beautiful. Amazing work, man. :D

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Posted December 09 2013 - 11:59 AM

amazing! although, i can already see some peeps that are about to say that this is a fatter infiltrator.
i'm not gonna say it, so if i were you, i'd change the cockpit a teeeeeeensy little bit.

AMAZING WORK BTW!!

[edit] although, it actually differs from it a lot. maybe when it gets coloured it will become more different :D

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Posted December 09 2013 - 12:02 PM

skill suggestion for this beauty:
un-load: increases the fire rate by some % for a short period of time
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Posted December 09 2013 - 01:18 PM

you know what ! i feel bad ; this amazing artwork that Mr Anthony has put in a lot of time and work might pretty much be ignored :unsure:

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Posted December 09 2013 - 01:26 PM

Amazing, excellent modeling! I can see why it took a month to build. It's very Hawken. I like the suggestion about putting weapons from the game on it, although the weapons you have made look great in themselves. Would be nice to see some rear views too.

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#8 Aregon

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Posted December 09 2013 - 01:48 PM

That is some good looking mech you got there lad!
I`ll fix it later.

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Posted December 09 2013 - 01:54 PM

Oh god, this is freaking awesome. :D

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Posted December 09 2013 - 03:03 PM

Wow, wow, wow!! :D

That's one cool A mech, indeed! ;) :)

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#11 ORGONOTIC

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Posted December 09 2013 - 03:40 PM

Quality work dude - it looks like it would fit right in to the game :D
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Posted December 09 2013 - 03:46 PM

OOOOHH!!  I like this one! The guns look very dangerous, but the whole exterior of the mech looks too exposed.  I gotta admit though, the amount of detail in this thing is marvelous!

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Posted December 09 2013 - 08:44 PM

That looks great mate :D
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Posted December 10 2013 - 08:05 AM

Nice work!

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Posted December 10 2013 - 08:17 AM

Reall nice work!
It is rendered to look like a plastic model, and I want to touch it. :D

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Posted December 10 2013 - 11:48 AM

Thank you all so much for the kind words and feedback. So first off, I love the infiltrator. And I love it because to me it makes the most sense. The inside of the cockpit looks the same as the outside. And that just makes me believe it that much more. I wanted to make a mech that made the most sense to me like that one. I love all Hawken mechs(like really love them) but I feel designing a mech that would actually fit the look of the cockpit you play in would be the most realistic. And yes, I designed my cockpit from the infiltrators interior cockpit. I wanted to see what it would look like.

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Posted December 10 2013 - 12:47 PM

Absolutely stunning work!

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Posted December 10 2013 - 01:43 PM

I love it, I would stretch the base of the feet a bit, they seem like they could go a tiny bit more forward to fit more like a foot, but its beautiful. I'll take 5 :D

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Posted December 10 2013 - 08:20 PM

Thats sweet. I need to re-model my A-class design. I really like the legs, but the front of the upper chassis looks just a bit too much like the Boot imo. The Boot has the obvious windshield in the front like this with the posts on either side.

Could you do straight-up front, back, top, and side renders?

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Posted December 11 2013 - 07:34 AM

your attention to small details is astounding. it is really amazing, you need to give/send developers a link to your work. Your mech deserves a place in the game.




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