Story
#1
Posted May 01 2011 - 10:56 AM
With every passing moment a person died I waited for an aid or retrieval squad but it never happened.I couldn't fly to the next station the outlaws would blast me like a bulls-eye.My mecha "hawken" would never survive the battle.I built it from scratch and equipped twin machine guns and mercury power source.I was just a recruit on a rescue mission to rescue hostages.I was trapped and the next asylum was on the other side of the grid.The military sent me on a precision job.I knew my calling.I jumped up and boosted my mecha thrust to full power.Shooting every thing in my way.I saw what was happening next and it wasn't good.A tiger rocket came flying at me.I knew it wouldn't destroy hawken but it would pack a punch..................................................
I woke on a cot my insides were exposed and my skin was burning I had what felt like a cancerous migraine."my name is ace............." thats all I could remember.Three figures hung over me they were messing with my insides.My instinct jumped in again and I kicked them away and grabbed my K-20 pistol from its holster.I looked around in the dark room.The american flag was hung in it there was a whole wall of weaponry,The most distinctive thing was the people they had gas masks on and marks on there arms that looked like royal lion.I knew who these people were and killing them would make me feel a whole lot better.
#2
Posted May 01 2011 - 04:03 PM
#3
Posted May 01 2011 - 09:39 PM
"We have mechs with bigass guns, lets kill eachother"
#4
Posted May 02 2011 - 09:43 AM
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"The difference between theory and practice is smaller in theory than it is in practice"
#5
Posted May 02 2011 - 02:42 PM
Your story is good , but i think they would use a more general approach , something more like an explanation to why Mechs are on war , maybe , like bounty hunters , or a war devastated earth where its every man for himself , or something like that.
Some kind of plot without a main character.
#6
Posted May 03 2011 - 04:30 PM
#7
Posted May 03 2011 - 04:39 PM
MoKnows said:
Lost planet mechs , and Mechassault came to my mind.
#8
Posted May 04 2011 - 05:47 AM
http://www.g4tv.com/... ... y-preview/
#9
Posted May 05 2011 - 01:29 PM
lavalamp1138 said:
This.
#10
Posted June 22 2011 - 09:35 AM
Soooo, whatcha think_
#11
Posted June 24 2011 - 03:08 PM
Build your opponent a golden bridge to retreat across
#13
Posted July 03 2011 - 01:43 PM
ZeroG131 said:
Soooo, whatcha think_
So in this story, Hawken is like the future AK47... I dig it.
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