hey guys kurtcobainshsotgun here. threw this together this afternoon. hope it does the game justice. thanks for watching.
https://www.youtube....h?v=dD-wVgWgJek
hey guys kurtcobainshsotgun here. threw this together this afternoon. hope it does the game justice. thanks for watching.
https://www.youtube....h?v=dD-wVgWgJek
It's not a bad gameplay video, but that is in no way a trailer. It tells us nothing about the story of HAWKEN, only showing us how the game works a little.
Some thoughts on the editing:
It's a pretty decent show for a first attempt. Give it another round of editing and you could have something even better. Don't get discouraged.
All comments here intended as constructive criticism aimed at helping you improve. Keep up the good work.
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Also a trailer doesn't have to tell you the history of a game....
I guess not, but I'm so used to movie trailers giving a short plot summary that I kind of expect that in a trailer of any kind. Loving the first part is great, but it does kind of belong to the game. It's the release trailer.
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