It dragged out for a little too long with repetition with certain models and angles. I would've liked to see not only a collection of different types of surveillance cameras, but a collection of different test screens as well and/or surveillance footage. The added historical clips were a nice touch.
I would've liked some sort of a faint musical track to go along with the video, but the lack of a musical track added a level of uneasiness to it, which I think is the point you wanted to make.
On a creepiness scale, it's a 3/5.
The works found in your link are awesome.