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[Csabi333]

My first hawken montage, please give me some critics

[Maxunarul]

I like is that you used a music that many people like, say it is music of mass taste, you manage with what people who do not play Hawken see it full and enjoying the music and at the same time satisfy their curiosity by Hawken , and obviously people like that if Hawken is going to see that you are interested in full play.

 

Maybe used in the edition more Mech`s as it is a video aimed at giving an overview of Hawken.

 

It's what I can comment from my perspective

Edited by Maxunarul, 16 May 2015 - 11:53 AM.

[Merl61]

As someone who has made a lot of montages I can say that this one feels as though it has little artistic value. You want to have a theme or tell a story to get people more excited about the clips. Also, you want to include more action and less buildup. Not bad for a first vid though.