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A "Snippet" of my next montage - I need your opinions!

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TrueMA

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In preparation for my next montage, I've decided to produce a small piece of what could possibly be in it.

 So, I edited this small bit to put my novice editing skills to the test, as well as get some opinions from you guys.

   

     Yes, I know it is very tacky. I didn't put too much time in it because I just wanted to finish it, Sometimes the tracker loses the target, and I had to manually keyframe half of it (You'll see what I'm talking about in the video), and the motion got a little "Jittery," for the lack of a better word.

 

   Well, here it is. Hope you guys can appreciate this. It took me a while.

 

 

  Thanks for reading,

 - True


Edited by TrueMA, 22 March 2016 - 09:12 AM.

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seems good, no comment


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Nice. I do see what you mean about the jitter, but in a short enough cut, I reckon that shouldnt be much of an issue.



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I don't know what you used to make that ui element but i would say make it appear much less shorter in full video. People can read two words fast enough and jitter will be less noticable. Add transparency. 

That circle part maybe make it bigger and put around a mech. Anyways it looks pretty good  :ninja:



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I'd add some deinterlace and glitch effects and keep the jittering to keep the Hawken feeling.


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