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#41 Aregon

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Posted March 19 2014 - 12:46 PM

We are waiting here. GIV UZ UR STORI NAOW
I`ll fix it later.

#42 Aregon

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Posted March 21 2014 - 12:10 PM

Omega, where is my story_ I AM F*CKING BORED HERE. I NEED SOMETHING.
I`ll fix it later.

#43 Dr_Freeze001

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Posted March 21 2014 - 01:02 PM

Yea, it's been a while.  A bit longer and I'll have to start FLIPPING SOME TABLES IN HERE!

#44 Ariexe

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Posted March 21 2014 - 05:46 PM

Omega and I are currently planning a massive plot twist, be patient
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Posted March 21 2014 - 06:15 PM

View PostAriexe, on March 21 2014 - 05:46 PM, said:

Omega and I are currently planning a massive plot twist, be patient

A collaboration_ O-O

Epic! ^__^

*Patiently waits*

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Posted March 21 2014 - 06:16 PM

I'm about to get a story rolling for myself as well, sit tight!

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#47 OmegaNull

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Posted March 21 2014 - 08:57 PM

Oh I am sorry guys but real life and me being burnt out from work doesn't help. Mind give me some room to breathe_

>.> <.<
Seriously, I am actually trying to figure out how to interwine 2 stories into one again.

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my mouth begins to water. Your Demise will be quick and wretched.

Enjoy your Pain and Suffering as I tear Limb from Limb. Prepare to meet your Final End.

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#48 Aregon

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Posted March 22 2014 - 12:27 AM

View PostWi2P, on March 21 2014 - 06:15 PM, said:

View PostAriexe, on March 21 2014 - 05:46 PM, said:

Omega and I are currently planning a massive plot twist, be patient

A collaboration_ O-O

Epic! ^__^

*Patiently waits*
You didn't notice he was working with others before now_

Thanks a lot douchebag.
I`ll fix it later.

#49 Wi2P

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Posted March 22 2014 - 06:53 AM

View PostAregon, on March 22 2014 - 12:27 AM, said:

View PostWi2P, on March 21 2014 - 06:15 PM, said:

View PostAriexe, on March 21 2014 - 05:46 PM, said:

Omega and I are currently planning a massive plot twist, be patient

A collaboration_ O-O

Epic! ^__^

*Patiently waits*
You didn't notice he was working with others before now_

Thanks a lot douchebag.

It wasn't implied, or blatantly said (by anyone, till now).

Excuse me_ 0-0 What did I do, Aregon_

Edited by Wi2P, March 22 2014 - 07:17 AM.


#50 Aregon

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Posted March 22 2014 - 07:18 AM

View PostWi2P, on March 22 2014 - 06:53 AM, said:

View PostAregon, on March 22 2014 - 12:27 AM, said:

View PostWi2P, on March 21 2014 - 06:15 PM, said:

View PostAriexe, on March 21 2014 - 05:46 PM, said:

Omega and I are currently planning a massive plot twist, be patient

A collaboration_ O-O

Epic! ^__^

*Patiently waits*
You didn't notice he was working with others before now_

Thanks a lot douchebag.

It wasn't insinuated, or blatantly said (by anyone, till now).

Excuse me_ 0-0 What did I do, Aregon_
Sorry for offending you, was supposed to be a joke on the fact that I had been helping him with some characters he got in the story.

Sowwy.
I`ll fix it later.

#51 Hijinks_The_Turtle

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Posted March 22 2014 - 07:26 AM

View PostAregon, on March 22 2014 - 07:18 AM, said:

View PostWi2P, on March 22 2014 - 06:53 AM, said:

*snip*
Sorry for offending you, was supposed to be a joke on the fact that I had been helping him with some characters he got in the story.

Sowwy.

<__<  You should of at least make obvious that it was sarcasm... :P  Anyway, I do hope the collab will go well!  Good luck Omega and Ariexe!

#52 Wi2P

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Posted March 22 2014 - 07:31 AM

View PostHijinks_The_Turtle, on March 22 2014 - 07:26 AM, said:

View PostAregon, on March 22 2014 - 07:18 AM, said:

View PostWi2P, on March 22 2014 - 06:53 AM, said:

*snip*
Sorry for offending you, was supposed to be a joke on the fact that I had been helping him with some characters he got in the story.

Sowwy.

<__<  You should of at least make obvious that it was sarcasm... :P  Anyway, I do hope the collab will go well!  Good luck Omega and Ariexe!

No hard feelings, Aregon. Thanks for clarifying. :)

I agreed. It's difficult to perceive sarcasm through text without some surefire method of indicating it.

#53 OmegaNull

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Posted March 22 2014 - 07:46 AM

I leik ware this is going.

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I am Omega Null. The abyss is my home and your last frontier. Welcome to my lair and become my Prey. As I track your scent through this nether,

my mouth begins to water. Your Demise will be quick and wretched.

Enjoy your Pain and Suffering as I tear Limb from Limb. Prepare to meet your Final End.

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#54 Wi2P

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Posted March 22 2014 - 07:48 AM

View PostOmegaNull, on March 22 2014 - 07:46 AM, said:

I leik ware this is going.

*Reads in a devious voice...*

#55 Ariexe

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Posted March 22 2014 - 08:00 AM

I won't spoil anything but its going a be big (I presume) and he needed help. I mentioned I'm a roleplayer and the fact im kinda writng my own story says that I would be a big help, so we're trying to make a good collaboration.

Same with my story, life and work man. itle take controll of you
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#56 Hijinks_The_Turtle

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Posted March 22 2014 - 08:11 AM

View PostAriexe, on March 22 2014 - 08:00 AM, said:

I won't spoil anything but its going a be big (I presume) and he needed help. I mentioned I'm a roleplayer and the fact im kinda writng my own story says that I would be a big help, so we're trying to make a good collaboration.

Same with my story, life and work man. itle take controll of you

I could say the same about me.  It's taking me awhile to get the first part of my project done.

#57 Ariexe

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Posted March 22 2014 - 08:26 AM

View PostHijinks_The_Turtle, on March 22 2014 - 08:11 AM, said:

View PostAriexe, on March 22 2014 - 08:00 AM, said:

I won't spoil anything but its going a be big (I presume) and he needed help. I mentioned I'm a roleplayer and the fact im kinda writng my own story says that I would be a big help, so we're trying to make a good collaboration.

Same with my story, life and work man. itle take controll of you

I could say the same about me.  It's taking me awhile to get the first part of my project done.

not to mention I have school, a game I have to make, and needy friends :P
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Posted March 22 2014 - 11:37 AM

I am a fellow nerd :D

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I am Omega Null. The abyss is my home and your last frontier. Welcome to my lair and become my Prey. As I track your scent through this nether,

my mouth begins to water. Your Demise will be quick and wretched.

Enjoy your Pain and Suffering as I tear Limb from Limb. Prepare to meet your Final End.

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#59 OmegaNull

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Posted March 22 2014 - 05:24 PM

A loud noise could be heard from outside. I heard 2 men talking as they came closer. My cell door came open and I was greeted by 2 men in lab coats, their faces obscured by masks:
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"Welcome to The Forgotten," sad a man with enthusiasm in his voice, "you are about to become something more."
Both me grabbed me by my arms and lead me down a corridor. Lights were evenly spaced and their were more cells as I passed. Each one identical to the last. I tried to resist, but they two were simply to strong. Eventually, we came to another door. A door that was menacing in size and bulk. A small touch pad was next to it.

One man pressed his hand on a pad and a brought light scanned across his hand, then, entered a code. The door came open, sliding slowly, making horrible groaning noises, as they pulled me inside. They door then began to close afterward. What I saw inside scared me. There were several other children ranging from young (maybe 5 or 6_) to several older kids (15-16_). Each of them were on a seat which had controls similar to that of an Axe, head gear, and tubes come off of them, many of which looked like IVs. I began to struggle more, however, the more I struggled, the harder both men gripped. It was completely futile. I was pulled reluctantly to a similar seat as all the others and forced in. My arms and legs were strapped down. A person next to me began to violently convulse, then, lay limp. Several men came over and began to remove various things and restraints from him. At least, I thought it was a him. They grabbed the person and pulled him away... unmoving, lifeless.

"LET GO OF ME!," I screamed, "LET GO-" a man placed his hand over my mouth. I could scream as it was too muffed. Another of the men held my arm down as they placed an IV into my arm. Another stuck me in the neck with something sharp. I began to scream. I violently tried to get loose, but one of the men struck me across the face.
"You little wretch, you are the future. Now, submit!," said the man angrily.
I felt another sharp prick in the side my neck, this time, I felt a rush through my body. Something burned through my veins. My heart began to beat rapidly and my skin felt like it was on fire. Soon, I began to sweat. This feeling of dread overcame my body but quickly began to fade.Everything around me began to slow down. I was terrified as to what was happening. Both men lowered a visor over my head and I felt pricks all around my skull almost like needles were piercing my skin. Something also pierced into my spine and an image appeared on my visor. It was a simple message, but sent shivers of fear throughout my being:

SURVIVE

Edited by OmegaNull, March 24 2014 - 09:19 AM.

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I am Omega Null. The abyss is my home and your last frontier. Welcome to my lair and become my Prey. As I track your scent through this nether,

my mouth begins to water. Your Demise will be quick and wretched.

Enjoy your Pain and Suffering as I tear Limb from Limb. Prepare to meet your Final End.

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#60 Hijinks_The_Turtle

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Posted March 22 2014 - 06:06 PM

Nice man.  Keep it up!  

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