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[JeffMagnum]

 

Maybe you'll learn something, but overall I doubt this will be too useful to people here. Mostly I'm just looking for feedback for future videos since this is the first one I've ever talked over or heavily edited. 

and yes I know my mic and voice and transitions are shitty

 

edit: added manual subtitles

Edited by JeffMagnum, 27 March 2017 - 07:36 PM.

[Youtube_ExGodV]

Maybe you'll learn something, but overall I doubt this will be too useful to people here. Mostly I'm just looking for feedback for future videos since this is the first one I've ever talked over or heavily edited. 

and yes I know my mic and voice and transitions are shitty

Crazy dodging and orb healing :) , i am going to learn this ...

Edited by Youtube_ExGodV, 26 March 2017 - 10:57 PM.

[Elite_is_salty]

Your DM scoreboard reminded me of Bkcat :(
RIP my good friend.

Thanks for the tips mag

[DerMax]

Your voice is fine, just add vibrance to it. The editing is fine too, and it's good that there's no dumb music to "complement" it.

[devotion]

no dubstep, no airhorns, are you even trying jeff

[coldform]

Crazy dodging and orb healing :) , i am going to learn this ...

try applying the 5 points in the vid first...

[Guns_N_Rozer]

try applying the 5 points in the vid first...

Eeveryone love to be an Orb Master 

[Bergwein]

Good stuff. Thanks!

[FunkMaster67]

Excellent video! Information well presented. Voice sounds fine. More videos like this are needed as I am sure players will go to explore maps and in game to apply your useful tips.

You asked for constructive criticism: If video was longer use of voice inflection and pauses will make it sound more conversational and less read. However for a short informationAL video like this you did great!

You are appreciated!

[Youtube_ExGodV]

no dubstep, no airhorns, are you even trying jeff

thank god i am not alone dubstep lover :)

[DerMax]

thank god i am not alone dubstep lover :)

It was a joke. You are alone, and you should feel bad.

[Amidatelion]

It was a joke. You are alone, and you should feel bad.

What if someone likes airhorns? Asking for a friend.

[Flight1ess]

Great job! would love to see more videos like this so I can show to my newbie friends without actually having to teach them ^^

[Elite_is_salty]

I like the sound of sorting algorithms. Am I normal?

[JeffMagnum]

Excellent video! Information well presented. Voice sounds fine. More videos like this are needed as I am sure players will go to explore maps and in game to apply your useful tips.

You asked for constructive criticism: If video was longer use of voice inflection and pauses will make it sound more conversational and less read. However for a short informationAL video like this you did great!

You are appreciated!

 

Great job! would love to see more videos like this so I can show to my newbie friends without actually having to teach them ^^

 

I'll probably do a series on properly using the more nuanced weapons and possibly detailed mech overviews too if the interest is there. I know SoldierHobbes has the mech guides already, but his are geared more toward people brand new to the game instead of most skill levels

[6ixxer]

no dubstep, no airhorns, are you even trying jeff

Need a vid where idubbbz is transposed on mechs that are doing something "light-hearted and carefree".

[nepacaka]

Nooo! I can't find horses key! is it on my keyboard? How i should use it effectively!?


do not get me wrong, but have a hand maded subtitles will be good xD
you have understandable spech (say it like a man who don't know english. i can understand most of what you say, but not sure that i hear several things correctly :C)
just say, that many gamers understand english text, but have a problem with speech translate. wiil be good to have subs :3
 

Edited by nepacaka, 27 March 2017 - 02:14 PM.

[JeffMagnum]

Nooo! I can't find horses key! is it on my keyboard? How i should use it effectively!?
[snip]

do not get me wrong, but have a hand maded subtitles will be good xD
you have understandable spech (say it like a man who don't know english. i can understand most of what you say, but not sure that i hear several things correctly :C)
just say, that many gamers understand english text, but have a problem with speech translate. wiil be good to have subs :3
 

 

I was actually considering further editing and linking to the script in the description. Here's the rough version I used for the video

[nepacaka]

now i need a mod for hawken which replace orbs to horses, for using it effectively :3

Spoiler

also, 

I'll probably do a series on properly using the more nuanced weapons and possibly detailed mech overviews too if the interest is there. I know SoldierHobbes has the mech guides already, but his are geared more toward people brand new to the game instead of most skill levels

 

will be great to find how to spread it effectively. i see many good (not bad, funny or useful) hawken videos with 10, 20 or maximum ~100 views, and it is really sad.

Edited by nepacaka, 27 March 2017 - 02:40 PM.