No you didn't. You made it worse.
This is effective use of colour.
It is internally cohesive, and communicates the concept. Namely, that the Lord of the Scrubs is laying the smackdown on your terrible formatting.
Your problem isn't that people can't read it, or that your grammar isn't perfect, it's that your post doesn't read like a human speaking. Read any of nepacaka's posts - his English is far from perfect, but it is entirely legible. And it's entirely legible because it reads like someone speaking English as a second language. It has cadence and grammatical quirks that flow like speech.
Your blocks of text read like something written by an inner-city 12-year old taught writing by a succession of underpaid and unappreciated college dropouts. To improve, consider the following:
- Format like C05 above: double line breaks are standard in longform internet written communication. They are clearer and space is not an issue.
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I can see you're trying to adhere to the "one concept per paragraph" form, but you need to pare them down some. It's perfectly acceptable on the internet to have a one-sentence paragraph (hell, it's perfectly acceptable in the written word too). Reduce your ideas to their bare minimum, unless you're someone like me who enjoys the sight of their words too much.
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- tl;dr write concisely
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- Finally, consider learning your subject material a bit better because as it stands virtually nothing you've said is true or makes sense oh my god
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1. You are only taking the attention out of the problem what its basically: super enchanced XT weapons x2 VS 1 non enchanced primary weapon.
2. Asking to writte with one sentence per paragraph, perfect grammar, especific format, etc... to someone who dont have english as primary language its absurd, i m not a novels writter, and i used a grammary corrector and also used the fluzzy bunny colors so please stop whining about grammary, we are on a video game forum, not in language University.
3. I lived in Scottland for a long time so i dont really need your grammar approval.
4. About writte concisely, i revamped totally the post AGAIN, but if read 19 lines for you its to much, then you maybe should give up on reading at all.
5. Insult me calling me a 12 years old kid dosnt really afect to my age what is 33 years old actually, and it say more about you than about me.
6. About nothing of what i said its true, in the previous version of the game, the dev team understood perfectly that double primary weapon was to much, if you cant see a XT version of it multiplicated x 2 vs a non enchanced weapon x1 its very unbalanced... then i cant do anything to open your eyes, tbh after all this whining i decided to give up on participate of this community, and Brexit myself from the forums.
(sorry i didnt used colors this time, cute pics or external grammar programs, but you took the rest of my patient)
PS: Dont laugh on ppl who speak with broken english, because that mean they are smart enough to learn 2 languages.
Edited by MatsuhiroMaru, 26 September 2017 - 03:21 AM.